This month I will be working on the edits for Fairytale's Beginnings. It is coming along nicely and hope to have it ready for Beta Readers soon. If you would like to read the 4th book in the series and help improve it, please email me at a.r.grosjean@hotmail.com and I'll be happy to send you a copy.
Here's what I would need from you (if you Beta Read the book).
--Are there any grammar or spelling mistakes?
--Is there an area that you feel could have something added or taken away?
--Does the story run smoothly? Were you confused at any point?
--What is your overall opinion of this story?
Remember, this story has been written for young children so the wording has been made to be understandable. I didn't want to use words like death so I used terms like Forever Sleep.
Once I am finished with the edits, I will continue working on Alien Taskforce. This story came about from a dream my husband had. I loved the way he told me about his dream and added in the fact that the MC had amnesia. When he discovers he's an alien, I just about fell off my seat. Now questions are bugging him like will the woman who's helping him remember, run to the hills, or will she help him uncover the truth about the murder he supposedly committed? Did he kill the man? If he didn't, why was he framed for it? That's the question, I'm dying to find out!
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